Opinion on track

[deffield]

Hi guys i'm Deffield, I'm still very new at producing so I need an opinion an how to improve my track, I'm using a FL 9 (Fruity Loop 9) system. So was wondering if anyone could give me some guide of wisdom on making dance music, Really appreciate it

this is the link to my track:

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?os9frfbic4o0j0n

[jim_branning]

Hi guys i'm Deffield, I'm still very new at producing so I need an opinion an how to improve my track, I'm using a FL 9 (Fruity Loop 9) system. So was wondering if anyone could give me some guide of wisdom on making dance music, Really appreciate it

this is the link to my track:

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?os9frfbic4o0j0n

dude be serious, put it online for instant streaming if u want an opinion. Nobody does "download this file" sites anymore for getting an opinion.