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  1. #1
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    Default Some cool rock! - feedback?

    I've just finished this new song. I self produced it all and programed the drums on EZ Drummer. 'Just wanted to see what people thought or if anyone has any constructive criticism at all?
    Cheers!

    http://soundcloud.com/sonny_prince/a...rosthetic-pork

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    Not my bag, but its got potential! needs some bas though!

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    cheers man, I don't have a bass unfortunately but as soon as I get hold of one I'll smash it out

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    Yeah the harmony guitars in the first half are a bit abstract without some bassings, they're also a bit happy sounding. I think you might want to consider putting a chuggy guitar underneath them too, I know it's 3 guitar parts but i reckon would work.

    The riff at 3:38 or so is pretty wicked, and the chugging after it is probably one of the strongest parts of the track. Maybe you should intersperse some of the lead parts with that motif just to break it up a bit.
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    My band made (another) Xmas song: https://soundcloud.com/polarityman/p...in-vallhalla-2

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    Thanks man! Sounds like some good advice - i'll give it a try

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